Friday, April 3, 2020
Adriana Mancini ENT3003 22A Elevator Pitch 3
The feedback I received on my elevator pitches was positive. The general feedback I received is that including my dogs made my video more engaging, I seemed confident, and I did a good job including the main information on my product.
Based on this feedback, I did not change the content from my last elevator pitch.
Thank you, everyone, for your feedback! I truly appreciate it.
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Hi Adriana!
ReplyDeleteAll of your pitches for this course had been very well executed and deserve all the positive feedback! I'm so glad you kept your dogs in the pitch, I think it adds a playful element to your video. I think it was a great decision to keep the content the same. Awesome job at keeping it clear and concise!
Hey Adriana!
ReplyDeleteI think you did such a great job with your elevator pitch! I really like that you had your two dogs in the pitch. The little puns at the end I thought were comical and made me laugh. I like how you included specific numbers in your pitch, for example "60% of people pick up their dog waste, and 40% make excuses." It shows that you have really done your research. Great job!!
Hello Adriana,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your third and final elevator pitch. I really enjoyed watching you present your doggie waste station. You did a great job at being confident throughout your pitch and engaging with the audience. Obviously, adding your dogs into the pitch is great and gives more of a visual for the audience. Overall, great elevator pitch Adriana!
Hey Adriana,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch. I love your product and the way you presented it. I think you are very clear and concise and make sure to grab attention right away with the dogs. I can tell you have made progress over the times you have done elevator pitches. Well done!