Friday, March 20, 2020
Adriana Mancini ENT3003 17A Elevator Pitch 2
I generally received positive feedback on my elevator pitch. As a result, I did not change the majority of the content. One of the suggestions I received that I thought was insightful was to remove all excuses for dog owners by offering gloves in addition to pet waste bags. I thought this feedback was useful because if dog owners are uncomfortable about picking up pet waste, they can obtain gloves from the Doggie Duty Stations. It is a win-win situation for the dog owner because they are reassured there is a solution for their problems, and it is also a win-win for their neighborhoods because the dog owners are keeping their communities clean at the same time.
The main change I made to my elevator pitch was including that both pet waste bags and gloves are available at the Doggie Duty Stations. Besides this suggestion, I did not change the majority of the content of my elevator pitch due to the positive feedback I received on my first elevator pitch.
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Hi Adriana!
ReplyDeleteOnce again, you did an awesome job this time around with the elevator pitch! The timing was great. You clearly expressed what is important to your product. I really enjoyed that you included your dogs in it, it made it more engaging. Also, a great job of applying the suggestions you received in the first elevator pitch. Thanks for your efforts on this assignment!
Hey Adriana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your second elevator pitch, and once again you did a great job. The dogs were a great prop as always and you brought an awesome amount of energy in the pitch. I liked how you added the gloves and pet waste bags as an extra prop for the pitch. It really gave a clearer image of your product and the proposed solution. Overall, a great and hooking elevator pitch.
Hey Adriana,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your second elevator pitch. I love how both videos were with your dogs, so you customer knows you have firsthand experience. I think the props really made the video as well, and I love how you were enthusiastic about the product. Overall, great job and it looks like your changes from the first pitch payed off as well.
Hey Adriana!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this second pitch! It was even better than the first time in my opinion. I really like the setting and once again that you had a fury friend with you. This really draws attention to your pitch and makes it feel rather close to home and relatable for your potential buyers.